Water Girl and the Fish
During November 1982 all the land and countries had disappeared.But there was 1 person left on Earth! And it was a Spanish girl named Peppa.Peppa had to live in a metal fish looking submarine but inside it looked brilliant even though it had no electricity.
One freezing cold day Peppa decided to go fishing with her hot pink fishing rod so she could get food.When Peppa finished fishing she was thinking what fish she caught, then she knew it was common Rainbow Trout it had nearly every color but black,silver and white.Then she cleaned and chop and rolled up the Rainbow Trout and Eat it! Now she can live a little bit longer.
Then Peppa got really bored that she jumped three times and nearly broke the metal fish looking submarine and then Peppa decided to never jump again or else she will live nowhere else or if she does again she will drown in the cold pacific ocean.
The end.
Note:
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Yellow=Adjectives
Great work Patrick!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have highlighted the nouns and adjectives in your story. Very interesting end to your story - I wonder what will happen to her.
Miss Gill.
Thank you Miss Gill and i think that the girl will die because no one else is on earth to help her
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ReplyDeleteHi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteYou have included a lot of imagination into your story. A hot pink fishing rod, sounds pretty good to me. Can you tell me, why she is the only person on the earth?
Thanks for the advice,
DeleteShe is the only one on earth because there was a tsunami washed the whole earth and she was on the metal fish submarine when it happened